Peter Stevens

After being savaged during yesterdays intial crit, I think the most valuable comment made was that it looked like a Powerpoint presentation. I wasn't that clear on that yesterday but now see the point being made.

Looking at work I have presented, I see actually that I have done is an exercise in what I think a graphics presentation is, and not really presented a piece of graphics that is anything other than proficient. There is no real sense of me in it, the ideas are valid, as there are many elements I like, they just need to be distilled and refined.

So, back to the drawing board...

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